Deep in the German soil were the test labs where the gases would be tested on chickens, monkeys, and some insects. But why did they create all this in the first place? Germany was bitter after their loss in World War II so they gathered all of the greatest German scientists and thinkers. They eventually apprehended that the best way for the Germans to attack was biochemically, so they initiated research. The weapons where meant to be spread around the the United States capitol, in order to kill the president, sending the country into a state of anarchy.
Decades passed until they figured out the exact amount and type of gases in order to create the weapon. All the scientist and supervisors of the project gathered around to see it in action. A shot was heard and one of the pipes containing the gas began to leak. Very quickly, the gas took away the lives of every person in that bunker, except one. Me.
Awwww the poor animals :(. I like how you added so much description to fill in people who didn't have a clue. I also liked how you used your wordly wise words. Nice job!
ReplyDeletegood job. but um... who is the red sock, i have no idea whose story i just read.:) but i like your story though, good use of the words!!:D
ReplyDeleteHaha i loved the beggining and the idea of the story, but it ended right when it was about to get interesting. Great use of words, and the improvement would be to make it a bit longer :)
ReplyDeleteGood work Miguel, but you misspelled "were" and you missed a period at the end. What inpired you to write about this?
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